This week’s focus is to put what I have learned and brainstormed into practice and begin writing some lyrics. I only managed to put together one song, but I think it encapsulates everything I hoped it would be.
At first though, instead of being excited to write, I felt this sense of looming dread over me. I felt as though I had a foundation to stand on, but the action of putting words on paper was still so daunting. And then, I had a phone call with my partner which changed everything!
Him and I typically call a few times a week; he is away from Victoria right now until January helping his family though a difficult time. During these calls, we often tell stories about the day, and take some time to unpack anything that is troubling us from the week. I brought up my concerns about starting this song, and somehow that manifested into a conversation about how we are both over-thinkers, and sometimes even debate with ourselves in the shower. Then it hit me, that was the perfect introspective song topic.
I spent some time reflecting on some of the insane thoughts I have had, and also some of the more deep, thought provoking things. I don’t know yet how well all of this will translate to music, but I am happy with the skeleton framework I have so far.
My plan for next week is to try to put some music to these words, and possibly record a rough demo of it as well. If that goes well, then I will put together a short EP of songs with a similar theme in the coming weeks, if it ends up being that I need more time to polish this song, then my inquiry will focus on this one only!
I have included the current lyrics (as of October 15 2023) of “Shower Thoughts” below. Enjoy!
The photo below encapsulates the mood of the second verse quite well, I think too.

Photo by Matt Forfar on Unsplash
Verse:
*big sigh, shower water turns on*
In the shower, I ponder
My mind starts to wander
I exhaust the mundane, and the insane
Why is the sky blue?
Is a hot dog a sandwich?
Yeah, coffee is a soup
Does a straw have two holes?
Maybe water isn’t wet.
I think I forgot to have my timer set.
Chorus:
My mind is alive
The thoughts swirl
like the steam in the air
The shower runs and I step in
And unlock a new place to begin
Verse:
Shower thoughts, they plague me
I begin to contemplate, exterminate, exacerbate **slightly speeds up**
Am I the problem, or the solution?
My brain feels persecution
Is this way right?
Or is it a new fight?
Oh go on, build it beyond!
If there is love
Then why does hate exist?
Why do the good die young
And the evil do wrong?
AH!
Chorus:
My mind is alive
The thoughts swirl
like the steam in the air
The shower runs and I step in
And unlock a new place to begin
Bridge:
I’m crying, I’m laughing
I don’t know who I am
Or what to do
I’m having a crisis in my shower at twenty two
Maybe its anxiety
Maybe its empathy
Maybe its time I laid these thoughts to rest
And believe what I know is true
That all I need to do
Is my best
Chorus:
My mind is alive
The thoughts swirl
like the steam in the air
The shower runs and I step in
And unlock a new place to begin
Verse:
Wait.
Isn’t hate only as strong as we make it?
If only the good die young
I still want to live that song
Maybe this shower is too small
For all these thoughts to exist
I should set them free
And be the love I wish to see
Chorus:
My mind is alive
The thoughts swirl
like the steam in the air
The shower runs and I step in
And unlock a new place to begin
Shower thoughts, I set them free.
Cover photo image credits
Photo by name_ gravity on Unsplash
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